by Wilfred Owen

Bent double, like old beggars under sacks, 
Knock-kneed, coughing like hags, we cursed through sludge, 
Till on the haunting flares we turned our backs 
And towards our distant rest began to trudge. 
Men marched asleep. Many had lost their boots 
But limped on, blood-shod. All went lame; all blind; 
Drunk with fatigue; deaf even to the hoots
Of tired, outstripped Five-Nines that dropped behind.


4

Gas! Gas! Quick, boys! –  An ecstasy of fumbling, 
Fitting the clumsy helmets just in time; 
But someone still was yelling out and stumbling, 
And flound'ring like a man in fire or lime . . . 
Dim, through the misty panes and thick green light, 
As under a green sea, I saw him drowning. 
In all my dreams, before my helpless sight, 
He plunges at me, guttering, choking, drowning. 

If in some smothering dreams you too could pace 
Behind the wagon that we flung him in, 
And watch the white eyes writhing in his face, 
His hanging face, like a devil's sick of sin; 
If you could hear, at every jolt, the blood 
Come gargling from the froth-corrupted lungs, 
Obscene as cancer, bitter as the cud 
Of vile, incurable sores on innocent tongues, 
My friend, you would not tell with such high zest 
To children ardent for some desperate glory, 
The old Lie; Dulce et Decorum est 
Pro patria mori.

Posted by RG on March 17, 2008
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Myles on paragraph 3:

This holds some very vivid imagery. Paragraph 3 and 4 both capture very well for me the image of what war must be like. I mean I can’t fully imagine what it is like without being in one, but the helplessness of people dying around you, either quick or slowly without you being able to do a thing about it, must work on a person’s mind who is constantly exposed to that. To me, I feel like all emotions would just shut off after a while, I might put a bullet through someone’s head as a sympathy kill, but after a while it seems like due to constant exposure, your body couldn’t take it. I’m sure writting these poems were tough because thinking about it probably stirred some old memories.

March 19, 2008 3:27 pm
Brenda :

While I agree that writing these poems was probably very hard, I also believe that the ones who could express it were the fortunate ones.
That it was probably very theraputic to be able to express the horror and deal with the emotional strain that war produces in anyone unfortunately enough to be “entrenched” in action.

March 23, 2008 1:43 pm
Kassidy on whole page :

To me this poem represents the chaos of the battles during war. What the men had to go through in the trenches and the terrifying thought of gas which was probably always looming in their minds. The last stanza is very grotesque to me, the phrasing and the imagery that Owen sets forth really paints a picture and not a good one.

March 20, 2008 8:34 pm
William on paragraph 3:

The line “In all my dreams…” makes me think of posttraumatic stress disorder. I’ve heard that people with PTSD have flashbacks that wake them up at night. I don’t know how well they understood PTSD during the WWI period, but Owen may have been drawing inspiration from his own experiences with combat stress.

March 21, 2008 12:32 am
William on paragraph 3:

Also, I wanted to say the image of a man drowning on land, surround by green light is an almost surreal image. It drives home the horrible unreality of war.

March 21, 2008 12:35 am
Brenda on whole page :

I watched a show on the news channel today about a woman soldier from Iraq suffering from PTSD. It was very disturbing, like this poem.

March 23, 2008 1:46 pm
Danielle on whole page :

I think that this poem is about how awful the conditions were at war. The battlefield was a tough place, and I do not think that is close to the right word choice. They hated the conditions they were in. He says we “cursed through sludge”. Men marched asleep shows one just how tiring this was for these men. They were injured, blinded, fatigued, deaf but they still kept pushing forward.
The second stanza is so vividly paints a picture of one dying from chlorine gas that is almost gross. It is really sad to think of so many men who lost their lives this way. I cannot imagine such a horrible death.
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March 23, 2008 10:08 pm
Danielle on whole page :

and I should have proof read that before submitting it. just ignore the random words that do not make sense. It is late (for me), o well.

March 23, 2008 10:10 pm

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